I’m back to throw my hat into the ring for the third annual Fall Writing Frenzy, run by the amazing duo Kaitlyn Sanchez and Lydia Lukidis! Check out the contest link for all the details, but basically I’m writing a 200 word story based on the picture below. When I saw this old church in autumn, a strange story began to unfold. It’s written for a teen audience. Special thanks to the prize donors and special judge Ameerah Holliday! I hope you enjoy!
The Accusation
(200 words)
The rising chants spur me forward. They’ve grown almost loud enough to drown out my hammering heart, and the crunching of leaves under my feet.
Am I too late?
The church comes into view.
Smoke prickles my nose.
What have I done?
I’m close enough now to hear shouted taunts—
“Witch!”
“Heretic!”
“Devil!”
All lies. But, who’ll believe me now?
Orange flames lash the pole. Crackling. Popping.
“Father!” I shout in vain. I’ll make him believe me.
But, I can’t push through the frenzied mob. I’m too late to stop this.
Even now, bound in ropes, Anna looks beautiful—chin high, face proud.
Does she know what I’ve done?
Guilt knots my insides.
But, Henry had wanted her. My Henry.
Before Anna came, I’d been enough.
So, I lied. “She cursed our crops.”
They needed a scapegoat, so they believed. It was easy, really.
Suddenly, there’s a loud bang, a green flash. I’m thrown backwards into the crowd.
Fear grips my throat like a fist. I’ll be trampled!
At the crowd’s collective gasp, I follow their gazes skyward.
Anna soars above us, one finger pointing at me.
Our eyes meet.
Then…
she’s gone.
Again, I wonder. What have I done?
UPDATE**** I won a critique from amazing kidlit author Dorian Cirrone. Thanks to everyone who puts this together every year!
Lindsey Hobson
I want more! Great job!
melissamiles1
Thanks for reading!
savoringeverymoment
Wow! Powerful language! Well done!
melissamiles1
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.
romontanaro
Wow, Melissa. Really tense! Well done! Good luck, Rosanna
melissamiles1
Thank you!
katiefischerwrites
You pack so much tension, worry, and excitement into 200 words. Just wow!
melissamiles1
Thank you so much!
wordwritermo
I didn’t expect her to actually be a witch. Very nice twist and excellent writing. Best of luck to you!–Melisa Wrex @mowrex (Twitter)
melissamiles1
Thanks, she wasn’t on the first draft! But, I liked it better this way. 🙂
wordwritermo
Me too!
melissamiles1
Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
Melissa Jenson
Wow! You really made me FEEL this very short story. Nice work and good luck!
melissamiles1
Thanks so much for that! I appreciate your kind comments!
melissamiles1
I’m happy someone else saw the same thing! Thanks for reading and commenting!
Sarah Meade
Oooooh! This is engaging and haunting. I enjoyed reading it, Melissa!
melissamiles1
Thanks Sarah! I appreciate your comments!
Colleen Logie
You lured me in and left me wanting more! You said so much in so few words; I feared you exceeded the maximum word count. Good luck!
melissamiles1
Thanks so much for reading!
Linda Johnston
Great job on this story! I want to know what happens next, so you’ll have to write a longer story now.
melissamiles1
Thanks for reading it!
Colleen Dougherty
You best be watching out for Anna! Nice! I love creepy!
melissamiles1
Thanks!
Karen Pickrell
So suspenseful. Creepy twist at the end. Well done! Good luck!
melissamiles1
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment!